Audience Feedback

As you can see above we posted our music video on Facebook so that other people could comment and so that we could get feedback on how to improve our music video based on what our target audience thinks. We got some great responses saying how much they liked it and how they thought it was funny to watch. They also thought our use of Andrew Goodwins theory was worked into the video well as they commented on our use of inter-textual references. How the one thing that most said needed developing about this video was the ending as they said that it needed to finished in a more smoother way and now we as a group will look at ways of accomplishing this.

Music Video First Draft

Journal Post 12

Journal Post 11

Journal Post 10

Feedback On Poster And Digipak

The feedback that i got on my Digipak and posters were;

• The copyright needs to be removed from the poster as it doesn't need to be there.
• Some of the less important things that are on the poster need to be down sized and more important things need to be made bigger.
• The Digipak spines need to be added to the digipak.
• The poster also needs to be made bigger on the digipak.
• the bottom left panel image needs to have an effect added to it in order to make it more appealing and fun.
• Aslo make the half CD bigger as it doesn't look right with regards to the ratio to the CD next to it.

As you can see I do not have many things that I need to correct so it shouldn't be too hard to make the necessary corrections that have been stated above. I will now make these correction and re-post my digipak and poster so that I can see the comparison between he two and how much better it looks.

Poster First Draft