Script For My Evaluation

Journal Post 14

Final Draft Of Our Music Video

Final Draft Of Poster And Digipak

Journal Post 13

Feedback On Music Video

From these feedback sheets we can understand as a group that the things that need developing are;

• Lip singing needs to be more synchronised with the song that is going on in the background.
• The target audience should be suggested to be clubbers and why only male?
• The pace of the music video doesn't match the sound, so needs to be changed slightly.
• There should only be one parody per room.
• The structure doesn't entirely make sense.
• To adjust the pace of the video you could find a different edit of the song.

We as a group will now go trough each individual point that we have been given as audience feedback and we will make sure to develop these things so that they are better and so that it is suitable for the target audience.

Audience Feedback

As you can see above we posted our music video on Facebook so that other people could comment and so that we could get feedback on how to improve our music video based on what our target audience thinks. We got some great responses saying how much they liked it and how they thought it was funny to watch. They also thought our use of Andrew Goodwins theory was worked into the video well as they commented on our use of inter-textual references. How the one thing that most said needed developing about this video was the ending as they said that it needed to finished in a more smoother way and now we as a group will look at ways of accomplishing this.